Jillian

Overall I thought this work was excellent excellent excellent!!!! Loved all of it! I especially like all the small details: the ring, the earring, reflected light in the eyes, zipper, etc. I also thought that the background was very well done, for the most part because of the trees. The rumple/shading of the cloth was very well done as well and I enjoyed looking at it. (and now for the part that people hate: stuff to work on for next time) Some of the technique used to smooth out some of the cloth was a little bit rough, especially on the middle torso. You could work out those harsh ridges with a little bit of smudging to get them looking REALLY nice. Shading: the legs near the bottom look a little bit too close in shade (they're a bit indistinguishable unless you look up close) Overall picture: for the proportions, the girl looks a little bit stretched (human proportions: about 8 heads tall, 4 for legs, 4 for torso. It looks like there are about 4 1/2 heads in the torso (remember its chin to forehead, not chin to top of inclined head) OVERALL GREAT PIECE! REALLY ENJOYED LOOKING AT IT!!! message me if you have any questions on my vocab (i like to use big words XD)